Monday, April 21, 2008

the perfect suicide

The Perfect suicide

As she slowly comes out confused and unaware that she is being looked at by the
some she us to love, she looks around and tries to find a way back home. She walks
to the corner of the street and she hears someone yell out her name
“Jay wait!” she turns around and sees that Freddy is calling out her name. As her head
is filled with disgust, she remembers the old times that they us to have. She slowly waits for
him. Freddy comes up to her and out of no where says “jay I still love you”.
As she is filled with anger with a mix of happiness she is confused on what to say.
She looks him with eyes of anger and yet they smile at the same time.
She turns around and walks home with out saying anything back to Freddy.
He calls out her name hoping that she will turn around and walks up to him.
But yet it is too late she had already reached home and had went inside.
He heart rising she is confused of what to think or say.
So she goes to her room and thinks for a moment.
She tries to forget about everything that has
happened and she goes online hoping her best friend
cassia was on so that she can tell her what had just happened.
As she gets on aim she sees Freddy is on, she hopes that he doesn’t
talk to her because she doesn’t know what she will say back to him.
To her it all came as a surprise out of no where. Her feelings are confused.
Out of nowhere he nightmare came true. She got an aim from
Freddy and it said” jay I still love you….why wont you respond to me?
Did I do something wrong?” jay is too scared and nervous she doesn’t
know what to say so she just does what comes naturally she says” sorry I
have to go now and as the she sings of aim. Completely scared and unaware
of what might happen next she calls her friend cassia. And this is when the
story of the perfect suicide began.
By: Jocelin Narciso.

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